Lemus+Efren

Efren's page I think activities should be keeped in school because it gives kids something to do with their extra time. instead of being at home all the time and having more of a chance of being obese. these are some other reason why we should keep after school activities.

If they dont have something to do they wouldnt no what to work for an what goals in life to pick. all they would do at home is eat, watch t.v., and play video games. they would have a greater risk of being over weight due to the lack of excercise.

Another reason why we should keep after school activities is to keep kid off the streets. If they dont have anyone to encourage them they'll go find someone else and follow them and do what they say. they'll find kid that are bad influences and pressure that kid into joining a gang. While they are in the gang they are likely to do drug because of per pressue instead of joining any after school activities.

the last reason we should keep after school activities is for kids to meet new people. If there were to be a new kid and you joined any of the after school clubs you could talk to people in that club an easily make friends. Many people need to scocialize with others they could talk about feeling or any other problems they have. also if their were no sprts, band, drama, and other after school activities many kid would make it harder for kids to make friends.

this ( CAPITILIATION )MDM. is why. to help kids have goals and know what they want to do in life,to get kids off the street, also for the last reason is to meet new people and scocialize. That is why i think the school system should keep after school activities.

=school all year= I think that school should not be all year long. If it was all year long the kids would have trouble keepiong (KEEPNIG)A.M.M. up, paying attention, and doing work. Here are some more reasons why we should not have school all year long.

the (capitalize the T in The ) first reason is that kids are going to get **frusterated(FRUSTRATED)KT** at the teachers and might get mad and do or say somthing (something)A.M.M. bad. Kids are not going to pay attention all year i wouldent( wouldn't)A.M.M. if( capitalize the I in If ) i were at school all year (comma) i would stop coming to class. there would be more fights, arguments, and more trouble in school.

the second reason is that the kids might have to go to work over the summer an **(AND)KT** make money. the kids that work might need the money to help out their parents, pay rent, or save up for collage. if we did have school alll year long kids would not go to school because of their work they might have to go to work late at night instead of in the morning.

the ( CAPITILIATION )MDM last reason is because kids need to enjoy their childhood years instead of going to school an getting bullied or getting frusterated **(FRUSTRATED)KT** at the work. kids need to relax an **(AND)KT** go on vacation somewhere. if there was school all year long kids would be more stressed by work bullies and teachers. if they do go on vacation while school is all year they will be missing school work and by the time they come back it will be more work then they can do.

those are all the reasons why i think school should not be all year. if you disagreee then write a better essay.

=comparing and contrasting=

I am going to compare and contrast pizzas and burgers theyr are both food and they are both good if you make it right.

the first paragraph is about the contrast between pizza an burgers they are both good food, both of them are really good. dependes on the way you make it.

the second paragraph is about the contrast of pizzas and burgers. pizzas are round triangle rectangle and many other shapes and the burger is round. the good thing is you can put alot of things on it.

the last paragraph is about how i like both of theses foods. they can both have alot of things on them like meat cheese and things like that an along thoses line the can put more things on them.

thses are the paragraphs that i have written for you entertainment so i hope you are pleased with the things i wrote you again to rephrase it is about pizzas and burgers.