McBride+Martavius

Martavius's Paqe !

School wont be fun if we dont have extra-curricular activities. Because sports are what represents a school in how well they do. They also helps us build character and show sportsmanship, and how to treat other people when your out, or antime of that matter. And it shows Character and trust. So we need those different activities.

The school will be lame. No other school would ever gear about us doing anything, being good at anything, or nothing of that nature. So sports are important, we'll be sooooo crushed if the extra-curricular activities were taken away.

Their wont be any money coming into the school, so therefore we'll be a broke school. And thats not good AT ALL !! So we'll lose computers, books, and all of the stuff that helps us learn more than we do now.

INTRODUCTION Have you ever went to a football game, basketball game, or soccer game ? If so, how would you feel if all of that was taken away. No basketball, football, none of that whatsoever. Wouldnt you be bored on the weekends? Thats why they shouldnt eliminate extra-curricular activities.

I agree that we should have summer break because everybody needs a break every once in a while. A nd (can't start a sentence with "And")A.M. just (capitalize the first letter of the first word in a sentence) holding us up in school for 8 hours a day isn't good at all. Even the teachers and staff need a break also.They get tired of us just like we get tired of them. Thats why I think we should have summer break, well thats one reason. (YOU NEED MORE DETAILS AND MORE SENTENCES)JS Kids wouldnt even have time with their family, say for instance, your family goes on a vacation to Hawaii, but your still in school so you cant go .(I FEEL YOU ON THAT ONE SHUN)JS -I completely argee A.M.

CONCLUSION So I think that we shouldnt go to school year round because we have to have time to ourself. And also, time with our family and loved ones, and it wouldnt be fair if we had to NOT talk to them because we have to go to school year round. ( WERE IS THE REST)ABE